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Friday 29 June 2018
newspaper report
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Kia ora Piper, im Brooke from Belfast School. I really liked your newspaper report about the flying snakes. I found it really interesting the way that they fly without wings. Maybe next time you could try and find a video of them flying from tree to tree. Do you know if they could be found in zoos? Because it would be cool to see one up close.
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