these are mainly some of the points we have been focusing on:
- time connectives
- Descriptive Language (similes, metaphors, sets of 3, etc.)
- Advanced Punctuation (semi-colons, colons, brackets, hyphens, etc.)
I have written about athletics day and what were the events that happened, this is my recount I wrote about athletics and re-wrote it on a site called piktochart:
Hey Piper! I am a student at Waikowhai Primary School. I love how you said in the text: Although I didn't throw as far as I did on practise days I was still happy with what I got! That's really great! This reminds me of when we did athletes when we did shot put I couldn't go that far but I was happy for the person who won! Maybe next time you could add a photo of you running our doing an activity. If you would like to check my blog out then you just press this link: https://wpsfaithc.blogspot.com/ Thanks and keep up the good work!
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