Friday, 29 June 2018

newspaper report

These past two weeks we have been writing and learning about newspaper reports and this week we had to make our own newspaper article about any topic we planned on our doc, We had to write 2+ stories, Here is the first page of my newspaper report and it's not quite finished so my task was to ask you for feedback.
do you have any feedback to help make my story better?

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Piper, im Brooke from Belfast School. I really liked your newspaper report about the flying snakes. I found it really interesting the way that they fly without wings. Maybe next time you could try and find a video of them flying from tree to tree. Do you know if they could be found in zoos? Because it would be cool to see one up close.


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